Sunday, December 26, 2010

Embarrassingly Rhymed

A moment, a day, a year
a cold evening and a hot tear
spent hoping against hope
that some day you will be near.

4 comments:

Shreya said...

Sadness :(

Rhymes are still the best, btw :D

RB said...

:) They are.

Subhadip said...

Chhahhh... what a sad rhyme! Rhymes should be light, funny, refreshing. Change a few words, and see what you get...

A moment a day, a year
a hot evening and a cold beer
spent hoping against hope
that some day there'll be free beer

Cheer up!

RB said...

:) While I do detest beer, the comment/suggestion is much appreciated. :)